Guns and Cigarettes

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6443 Bombax Ct.
United States
20002
United States

The smoke engulfs your body

I cough in disgust

“that'll kill you.”

And you respond with a smirk

Hypocrite is all I can think

As I do the same

You take a drag as do I

Ones on the skin

The other in the mouth

Is it a competition?

Who will die out first?

If it's not a blade

Then maybe a gun

For you it's might possibly be

All the alcohol

What's the difference between a gun and cigarette

We're both going to die

At the end of a barrel

With a cut off filter

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