Give Up?

when is it approprate

to give up and give in

when can the breathing stop

and the struggles cease to be

must this tradegy continue

must there be a crash and burn

cannot this end here and now

with a whisper in the wind

not necissary

and certainly not missed

when is it right

to give up

because this needs to stop

this heartache and headache

this car crash in slow motion

everything just needs to...

STOP

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