FUTURE

Location

this morning tonight,

preparing to what is set forth,maybe destiny;

i speak to the light,

crying and weeping, unknowingly pressing forward hastily;

maybe one day i'll know, no; be

Comments

kbrady41296

9 years ago

This is amazing. I read it twice and the second time I could see it in my head. It's relatable; just keep reaching for the light and continue with poetry.

Jose D Serrano

9 years ago

thank you a lot!!! Seriously it means so much getting a positive review on the second poem i've ever written!

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