Free me

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28214
United States
35° 16' 59.9844" N, 80° 58' 33.8016" W

It comes
Slowly
On the edge
It pushes
I push back

One more day free

Another crack
It comes
Quicker
Inside
It pushes
I nudge

One more day freed

A break
It comes
Faster
Consuming
Overwhelming

I accept

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