Flaws?
the day begins
determination builds up
the reasons for life
come by and force
to keep on.
as school progresses
my stress goes up,
i concentrate enough
to take down the stress.
I'm on the bus
I'll see the birds fly high in the sky
I just remember
a brief good old time
As i go to sleep,
I think of it all
the unreacheable reason,
still there in my mind.
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