Dots in the Sky

Sat, 08/19/2017 - 15:54 -- RoryNC

Dots in the sky

To connect our sins

So that we see them

 

The unforgiven ones

Will be green

The forgiven ones

Will be white

 

I wonder how many Jesus would have

I wonder how many I would have

 

Like stars, they’d show us

How flawed we really are.

Wouldn’t that be great?

This poem is about: 
Our world

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