Don't Kill Yourself by Timothy S.

Don't kill yourself! Put the knife away! Remove the clip from the chamber! You are not an animal, therefore, you don't need a tamer! Don't do it, God loves you and your life has a surprise purpose! He died to give you the victory from those in high verses who looks to battle you for no reason. God's plans' for you came to completion and He gave you someone to believe in when the world is uneven. So don't kill yourself! Please! It's not over for what He has to do next, despite of your ex along with your friends who rejects your complex thoughts. God made no mistakes on your behalf, regardless if someone else won't accept you during this time span. I address this to the woman, and I address this to the man-don't kill yourself! Or treat yourself like a soda can to be thrown away in the trash because you're not garbage! Remove your hand from the cartridge which only causes carnage to shed more tears like garlic. So please don't kill yourself! I'm serious!-And keep going forward in your days by giving the Lord some praise than a phrase that pays! Before you pick up that razor to cut your wrist in sadness; take the time to think about His tender kindness in your madness and pray for His help through malice. Yes, He knows how hard this life can get each day as you arise from the bed, and how you dread on what's ahead in a serious struggle to get some bread. But listen, don't get misled by these things and look for a way to kill yourself; ending your life is certainly not the solution! Please find a way to clear your mind of this pollution in order to seek a resolution as a substitution from this death institution. The Lord's spiritual army is recruiting so grab an app to sign up. You shouldn't kill yourself-suicide will only make things worst! So leave the pills remaining in the sink cabinet; ending a life is not accurate because the LORD seen you adequate by sending His Son to advocate on your side! You're probably in a position where your kids hate you; the job you worked at suspended you; the bills never cease to rise; your car broke down; and slash-or your wife-slash-Husband stopped loving you like the first time ya'll crossed path. Listen, although these circumstances causes wrath in your attitude, through Christ alone you can experience a joy that's timeless. My brother, don't kill yourself. My sister, don't kill yourself. As of now, there's dryness so you're thirsty with this blindness of receiving the finest, and it's getting too loud right now to hear silence, but the Good News is added in Jesus-no minus. It's going to be okay! So rest in the Lord and chill; despite of the high hills, along with the bills spilling through your pockets. If you open up and let God fulfill He will still the waves dashing the concept of taking your life. Shake off the thought of killing yourself, and cling to the cross to experience the freedom you've been searching for. No one is able to trade you like a merchant, so love yourself and hang on, and remind yourself that you're different in your own tune, that is not the same song. 

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ScholarshipGirl22

Ive struggled almost all my life with having suicdal thoughts and many times i have tried to but never could go through. Reading what you wrote really brought up some past emotions ive had and you really did a great job with this. I feel like you really understand what i felt and this is a great poem for people to read if they ever feel like that. I really enjoyed reading it.

Timattack

Praise God! I'm glad it encouraged you ScholarshipGirl22. Your life has a purpose. Stay blessed.

-Timattack

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