Dark and Bright

Sat, 04/20/2013 - 21:32 -- kayla15

Location

40211
United States
38° 14' 13.9128" N, 85° 49' 22.89" W

When you take that first step into the darkness you'd never know
how much pain was piled upon your soul
you've went through hell and back but just a few steps away
was just a fact
you had happiness and rainbows
how could you not know
they hurt with the lies and games
but through all u saw what would soon become a gain
not many wanted you to be happy
instead they wanted you to feel gone not noticed but
when you took your steps you found a way
how you knew at once you'd have your day!
Now at peace love you
and don't worry about how.. or ..who

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kayla15

this such a meaningful poem for me so please vote for me!

kayla15

very happ

savigirl14

This poem is really great. It has a lot of meaning so keep writing.

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