Dad

Location

10460
United States
40° 50' 29.8248" N, 73° 52' 48.468" W

Dad, an immense solitude invades me,
A dark, Earthly destiny will shut down and erase forever Our love,
Soon will no longer exist laughs but hate and sadness;
My heart will drown in tears.
Where are you dad?
Will you let me fall in this profound hole?
Where my eyes will no longer bright?
And all for your manly pride,
where is your pain?
You abandoned me when I needed you the most.
I who have done nothing but follow your path,
Me who was been there for you always?
Now you turn your back and do not look me in the eyes
because of shame to humanity
what a deception dad,
but you know I will always be there even when
no longer spring exists or the sweet and soft smell.

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savigirl14

That is really good

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