Broken Thoughts


1. Look At ME,

I've CHANGED,

Can't You SEE?

Ever Since That TRAGEDY, I Shot Up With A "BANG"!!!!

2. Trapped In My Own Personal HELL,

SCARS Up & Down My ARM, Acting As My Guards

How? How Could've FELL?

Looking Back, I've Come So FAR

3. She SAVED ME,

Built Me UP,

Helped REMAKE Me,

From That, I JUMPED Out Of The Darkness

Finally, Now, After So LONG,

These BROKEN THOUGHTS..........Are GONE

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

modify this poem in a different format

dont list

just write freely

come up with a word and let it flow naturally

i like the idea behind this poem

keep building

savigirl14

This is a good poem. I love the message of how you have changed and you are remade. Keep writing and brainstorming new ideas. Please read my poems and tell me what you think

S.J. Hernandez

Thanks! Don't forget to checck out my other poems as well

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