Broken Angel

She walk alone tears running down her face.
No no one knows her pain.
She slices her wrists wanting to die.
Hoping her mom wont think its her fault.
They did anything they could to to bring her down.
They spreadr umors all over town.
She never once asked why?
Then she took her own life.
She left a note thait said why did you hate me so ?
What did I do to you ?
I'm gone now the world will be better off.
Tell daddy and sissy I love them.
I'm on heaven now I feel no more hurt.
Mom please don't cry I love you.
It wasn't your fault.
For every action there is a reaction because heartbreak doesn't just happen.

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pierce_the_veil_lover_23

this is a very emotional poem.. good job brought me on the verge of tears

savigirl14

Wow this poem is amazing. It is very powerful and i think it shows how all mothers in this situation feel. Please read mypoems and tell me what you think.

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