Blood Pumping

Tue, 07/15/2014 - 11:55 -- Zachb27

Seeing the hate, the disgrace.

When you're beaten down you hide your face.

"Who did this to you? What happened?"

"You cant know. You'll just be saddened"

What you dont know is it angers me.

To see the love of my life in misery.

I lifted her arms into the light,

The blood was as dark as night...

 

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