Apart

Location

33810
United States
28° 5' 25.9152" N, 82° 1' 8.0976" W

Wouldn't you know
Just how low
I look at myself
Not so good health
So many different battles
Emotions hard to tackle
Have I really found
is this just rebound
My mind like a maze
Can't see through the haze
Only know how I feel
Is this truly real
Take time apart
Would be really smart
If we cared
Both be scared
For only two weeks
And my heart beats
I'm still in pieces
This is my thesis
Time apart can be fun
I'm not going to run
Let the desire
Get a lot higher

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

cool poem

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